Revisions



On this page I have made a log of the specific revisions that I have made to improve my wikispace based on the suggestions made to me by the teacher.

6/18/2012 Page: Professional Development Page Suggestion: Be specific on what you are committing to long term and short term goals. Revision: I changed my goals to something that is more measurable than I had previously. For instance I changed my goals to reading one article a week as opposed to as many as possible.

6/20/2012 Page: Content Area Research Suggestion: Proofreading to ensure there are no grammar or spelling errors. Revision: I reread the page and corrected all the grammar and spelling errors that were present.

6/26/2012 Page: Tools and Games Suggestion: The calculator widget does not seem to fit the page, either delete it or add clarification for it. Revision: I added clarification on why it is there: to help the students with their math homework in case they do not have a scientific calculator at home.

6/26/2012 Page: All pages Suggestion: Add a picture or image that pertains to the content on each page. Revision: I checked every page to make sure there was an image that was fitting to the particular content on the page. I also made sure that each of them were cited properly with correct spelling,

7/2/2012 Page: Calendar Suggestion: Change the permissions on the calendar you added because it is not showing up for anyone but you. Revision: I went to my google calendar, changed the privacy settings so others could view it, and reuploaded it onto my wiki page.

7/2/2012 Pages: Content Area Resources, Wiki Rules, Tools and Games, & Professional Development Suggestion: Don't have a title and a subtitle that is the same. Revision: I deleted the subtitles that were the same names as the titles.

7/2/2012 Page: Tools and Games Suggestion: The arrangement of the widgets appears off. The three reading widgets are stacked next to each other with the explanation for calculator next to them. Revisions: I changed the arrangement of the widgets so they would appear stacked on one another. I also added a line in between them so it would be more organized and less confusing.

7/5/2012 Page: Projects Page Suggestion: Add a description of your objective of the podcast. Also, add a description of the activity you talk about in your podcast. Revision: I added the PASS objective that we focused on in the podcast. I also added a brief description of the activity.